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About me

I have a brother and he is so annoying. he is 12 years old.
And I also have a little sister, she is 5 and just started school. 

I have 10 pets. I dog named Roy, 2 cats called Gabby & Max and last of all 7 sheep.

I am a total foodie. Except for Brussel sprouts. My favourite fruit are pawpaw, custard apple & star fruit.

I love cheering, gymnastics and hanging out with my friends.

I here's a little secret about me. I'm really really really CRAZY!!

How to give a quality comment!!

How to Comment

Commenting can be hard sometimes. You don't know what to say. You don't know what to write. So I'm gonna give you some tips.


Tip 1: Start With A Compliment
It's nice to start with a specific complement. If you like the bloggers writing, tell them. Be positive and be specific.

Tip 2: Add New Information
It's always good to add facial information to your comment. For example, if someone's writing about climbing a mountain and you've seen it or read about it  go ahead and write some new facial info about that mountain. How wide is it? How tall is it?
Be sure to look at the comment section to make sure no one else has written what you wanna say, and if no one has go ahead and write it.

Tip  3: Make A Connection
To make the comment better it is nice to have a connection with the writer. Connections remind people of things.
For example, let's say your friend published a post about their fishing trip and they caught a huge fish. And it reminded you of when you went fishing and caught some fish too. Then you might want to share some facts about that time, because it is connected to the other person's post.

Tip 4: Finish With A Question
It's always good to ask a relevant question at the end of your comment. Try to get a conversation going.
For example, if someone put something about butterflies and you are wondering about their life span or the different colours they come in, add that question in your comment.



So those were some tips about quality comments.
I there is anything else that you wanna know, ask a questions in the comments below.
Thank you and Happy Blogging

Chubby Bunny Out!!

Oh no, hooray! Oh no, hooray! What am I supposed to feel like right now. This is supposed to be my day of honour and joy. I am so nervous, and so proud at the same time.

No, no no Ellie, come on, pull it together, you can do this, snap out of it. You are a responsible year 6 and should stand tall.

We are at an assembly for the year 6s (me). To award them a badge that reminds them to stand tall for others and yourself. I'm sitting at the front with all my friends. Soon a video of me comes on. I hide my face in my hands so everyone does not see my tomato red face. Soon it's over, that wasn't so bad, was it.

Once everybody's video has been played, Mr Ritai (our principal ) calls us up on stage to collect our badges. First I have to shake both my teacher's hands and then collect my badge from Mr Ritai. As soon as I have my badge I take a good look at it. It says “Te Kaha.” Which means Stand tall. Stand tall to me means to look out for others and to raise your hand when something needs doing.

I am Ellie and Stand Tall is what I’m gonna do this year.

This week is my third week of school and already I think I'm getting better at my swimming. My goal for swimming this year is to swim at a minimum of 20 metres. At school we go swimming everyday so I get to practice and improve my skills.

What Would You Sell

Topic : If I owned a shop

If I owned a shop, it would be a pet day care, called Pet Paradise. It would be open 24/7 including overnight stays. Every pet would be allowed, from dogs to elephants, from cats to ants.

Pet Paradise would include all meals, pet spas, pet massages and playing with the animals. The beds will be any and every size with an extra fluffy duvet and pillows. The maximum stay would be 18 nights.

Now it comes to the price. Even though Pet paradise is going to come to be the best ever Pet day care in history, it all will come at a very low price. Only $10.50 for every 24 hours.

And that would be my dream shop.

This is our screencastify of our spaces design for 2017.


By Carys, Ellie & Aliya

My Carnival Art

This week is the Frankley School carnival. For carnival every year, all the students have to make some sort of art or craft. “Carnival Art.”


And then our family buy it back to raise money for the school.


I have made a popsicle stick house. “Popsicle Deluxe.” My house is two story and has a trap door at the top.
                                                       

I am selling mine for $4.50.


I am proud of all my effort put into my carnival art.

Blink Blogging - What I'm Proud Of This Week

Blink Blogging - What I’m proud of this week

This Week I’m proud of my knowledge goal. My knowledge goal is “Round Decimals to the Nearest Tenth or Hundredth.”

Next week I think I’ll be ready to prove my goal. Here is some of my work…

A Mystery

I lay in bed frustrated and confused. I can't tell the time yet, I'm only four, but I assumed it was somewhere in middle of the night. I wonder, are mum and dad still awake, should I get up and check. I will, and by the way I decided this proud and confidently by my own choice. 

I'm now creeping out of my bed into the hallway. It's dark and cold out here compared to my nice, warm, snuggly bed. Luckily the bathroom light’s on.

I slinked into the quiet, empty room and peeked round the blunt corner of the wall. 

I saw it there and then. I could just make out a black motionless figure sitting cross legged on the chair across the back of the lounge. I froze like a snowman.  My heart felt as if it was thumping so hard it was about to come right out of my chest. By now my whole body was shaking as if I was getting massaged karate style. My mind was focused on one thing, nothing more. I quickly and quietly backed away. 




I slipped back into my bed, tucked myself in, sealed my eyes closed and never got out of bed again. 

Comment below and tell me what I did well and what I need to improve on!

Inter school

Yesterday inter schoolers went on a journey to Coastal School in Okato. The Netballers, the rugby team and the footballers played against the students of Coastal. I'm in the football team, I'm proud of us because we played real good with our defence and the attackers were great getting past the other team's defence.
The final score was 8-0 to Frankley. I'm looking ford to our next game. 

This artwork was created by Ellie, Ella & Robyn, May 2016. It is in the style of cubism. Our artwork means Frankley school shows sharing, caring & kindness towards others. This artwork was inspired by Pablo Picasso. :)

Pepeha

Have you learnt anything from this video?

Please give feedback in the comments below :)